Monday, December 7, 2009

poemb

It's turtles all the way down--
To mind's end
or a place too small to exist.

Carrying the world upon its back.
And universes bubble forth
as from a cauldron:
Into Rapid expansion
at the release of energy;
(a sigh or a laugh)
escaping unexpected in all its form.




*Is there an easy way to indent (by using the spacebar, and not only the tab? I hate that it's always such a chore to make a poem look like it's supposed to.

1 comment:

Freya's Human said...

Oh I like this poem. I'm not very good at critiquing them but I do like it.

As for the indenting--you can use space bar. Or you could copy and paste from your Word program (or office program) and do it as you normally would. Outside of that, I think tab is easier than space bar--depending on how much indenting you want to do.